Well, to be brutally honest, this isn't as well done as you could've done. First, you really need to fix that font. Both the title and subtitles need good fonts to attract attention from the background, which is nice but is a bit too bright and distracting, and from Mr. Harbeck which is too awesome for us. For the background, you could darken it a bit. Oh and there's the spot underneath charbeck that doesn't have a background. Other than that, GJ.
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ReplyDeletei like the poster overall but the background could use a little more touching up but good job
The background could use a little more work but I understand that it was hard since you had to make it from scratch.
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Thank you for your comment Jayson
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Well, to be brutally honest, this isn't as well done as you could've done. First, you really need to fix that font. Both the title and subtitles need good fonts to attract attention from the background, which is nice but is a bit too bright and distracting, and from Mr. Harbeck which is too awesome for us. For the background, you could darken it a bit. Oh and there's the spot underneath charbeck that doesn't have a background. Other than that, GJ.
ReplyDeleteThank you Theresa for your comment
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