Monday, December 8, 2014

Patrick's photo essay

Christmas Tree EDITED.jpg
It’s that time of the year again when every house contains a lovely and bright Christmas tree.

All the children are waiting for a letter from Santa

Christmas Ball EDITED.jpg
What is Christmas without a  Christmas ball hanging on their Christmas tree

Other than just a Christmas tree, people use other plants to represent their Christmas spirit

Butterfly ornament EDITED.jpg
Some people decide to think out of the box and have different Christmas ornaments

Light EDITED.jpg
Most people light up their houses for more Christmas joy

Light background EDITED.jpg
Everybody truly loves the holiday of Christmas


  1. I like how the pictures are taken in a with only the Christmas lights on, it makes the picture stand out. You should have more pictures.

  2. Patrick

    Set up of Blog (5)
    Published This is done correctly (5)

    Set up of body (10)
    Presentation I do not appreciate the micro font. It is hard to read. You also have centre justification on (8)

    Story (25)
    Describe why your subject is important or have a story! I like how you took a theme of Christmas. Your explanations were well done. Watch your capitalizations. (22)

    Quality of Photos 35
    tell a story You attempted to take different types of photos. Some of them worked (lantern, silver ball. But some could have been done differently. Work on using different types of photos to maximize your storytelling. 30